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Expository Writing

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blinking bullet  In an expository paragraph you give information. You can explain a subject, give directions, or show how to do something. In expository writing, linking words like first, second, then, and finally are used to help readers follow the ideas.

blinking bullet  This paragraph, like the others, organizes itself around three parts. A topic sentence allows the reader to understand what you are writing about. The middle part of the paragraph contains sentences that follow one another in a logical sequence of steps. The final sentence closes your subject with an emphasis on the final product or process desired by the topic.

 

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The key word is "explain."

 

Rubric Concepts

Traits: Organization, Content and Ideas

Literature: The teacher will select two to compare and contrast:

   "The Struggle to be an All-American Girl" by Elizabeth Wong (344)

   "Choice: A Tribute to Dr. Martin Luther King" by Alilce Walker (367)

   "Homeless" by Anna Quindlen (461)

   "Misspelling" by Charles Kurault (469)

Focus Areas: Simile, Metaphor, Imagery, Descriptive Details, Mood, Consistent Tense (third person).

 
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Explaining a Process
 
Explaining a Concept
 
 

     Chocolate cake with vanilla/almond frosting provides a tasty treat for any occasion. Follow the directions for making any flavor of chocolate cake. While the cake bakes in the oven, prepare a box vanilla frosting mix added with roasted and buttered almond slivers. Evenly coated in melted butter the almond slivers toast in a hot skillt for approximately ten minutes. The slivers thoroughly toast without turning crispy. Cool the toasted almonds and set aside a handful for the final touch. Fold the almonds into the vanilla frosting, and after covering the cake, sprinkle a handful of toasted almonds on the top. After serving this desert your guests will ask for the receipe of your chocolate/vanilla/almond cake.

      Integrity. The word evokes the wonder of whether or not our society deserves its value. With constant whining about one's "rights" there exists the denial of personal responsibility and the accompanying lowering of personal worth. Where then are the individuals who will stand up to the demands of family unity, a strong work ethic, and a wholesome participation in the societal framework? These very demanding environments cry out for mature behavior in everyone, youth as well as adults. Only as each individual accepts responsibility for truth, honesty, and a job-well-done will integrity, once again, emerge as a pillar of our national pride.  
         
 
Explaining a Relationship
 
Explaining How Something Works
 
 

 

 

 

 

 
 
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COMMON LINKING WORDS / PHRASES

* = Please refrain from using these terms

 
 
To show location:        
 

above

across

against

along

among

around

away from

behind

below

beneath

beside

betwen

beyond

by

down

in back of

in front of

inside

into

near

off

onto

on top of

outside

over

throughout

to the right

under

           
To show time:        
 

about

after

at

before

during

first *

second *

third *

till

until

meanwhile

today

tomorrow

next week

yesterday

soon *

later *

afterward

immediately

finally

then *

next *

as soon as

when

           
To compare things:        
 

in the same way

similarly

likewise

like

as

also

   
           
To contrast things:        
 

but

on the other hand

otherwise

however

although

yet

even though

still

 
           
To emphasize a point:        
 

for this reason

to emphasize

again

to repeat

truly

in fact

   
           
To conclude or summarize:        
 

as a result

therefore

finally *

last / lastly *

to sum up *

all in all

in conclusion *

in summary *

 
           
To add information:        
 

again

also

additionally

equally important

in addition

another

and

besides

for example

for instance

moreover

next *

likewise

finally *

as well

along with

           
To clarify:        
 

in other words

put another way for instance that is