A.P. United States History

 

Scoring Rubric for Essays

 

Scale: 1 - 9 for all essays including the Document Based Question (DBQ)

 

8 - 9:           Contains a clear, well-developed thesis.

          Supports thesis with substantial, relevant information.

          Understands complexity of question; deals with question in depth.

          Effective analysis.

          May contain minor errors.

 

5 - 7: Contains a clear thesis with limited development.

          Supports thesis with some relevant information.

          Limited understanding of complexity; may deal with only one aspect of question in depth, or with all in a general fashion.

          Limited analysis, mostly describes.

          May contain errors that do not detract from overall argument.

 

2 - 4: Lacks a thesis, or thesis may be confused or underdeveloped.

          Lacks supporting information, or info is minimal or not accurate.

          Ignores complexity, may deal with only one aspect of question or all superficially.

          No analysis.

          May contain major errors.

 

0 - 1: Incomplete response.

          May simply paraphrase or restate the question with no discussion.

          Limited or no understanding of the question.

 

 

General grade equivalent:

 

9        =        A                                    4        =        C-

8        =        A-                                   3        =        D+

7        =        B+                                   2        =        D

6        =        B                                    1        =        F

5        =        C+                                   0        =        F

 

 

 

Ten Suggestions for Better A.P. Essays

 

1. Be certain that you understand the question and you attempt to answer it as best you can. Underline the command words.  If there is more than one part to the question, be sure to address each.

 

2. Use facts to support your thesis, arguments, and generalizations.  Make as specific  references as possible, no matter how general the question is. Load your essay with facts.  You can never put too many in a good essay.  Three to five facts per paragraph is  a good rule of thumb.

 

3. Have a thesis which answers the question in the introduction. A good thesis should attempt to tell why, explain, or somehow account for the reasons a particular set of circumstances occurred.  All facts should reinforce the thesis.

 

4. Use standard organization with an introduction, body, and conclusion.  A.P. essays in the highest category will often run six or more complete paragraphs (six or more sentences) with five or more facts in each paragraph.

 

5. Use good English grammar.

 

6. Use the past tense consistently.

 

7. Avoid first or second person pronouns (even if they appear in the question). Use the term “one” if at a loss.

 

8. Be careful with your spelling, not your instructors.  Pay special attention to key words such as historical terms or names.

 

9. Avoid sophomoric efforts at humor.  These usually fall flat. Instead, strive to employ literary devices such as metaphor or irony if you must be cynical at all.

 

10. Proofread your essay if time permits. Budget your time so that you finish the essay.

 

 

- Reference to other historical occurrences is helpful.

- Do not stray too far from the main idea of the question.